I'm done I guess-- well sorta. I guess class is over and we've all revealed our pen names, but I feel bad for never posting some of my assignments. It's kinda lame, but if I find some time in the next couple weeks I think I'll end up posting them before I let this blog sink into the archives of Mr. Nelson's past writers.
Cheers guys. We made it.
Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Dawn
Well, this is it. Hopefully this is a beginning, not an end:
Dawn
My house is silent as the clock strikes 3:00, and I cannot help but sigh as I sing a familiar refrain that goes like... ♫ Three A.M., a boy sits outside his house lonely with his guitar ♫ The situation is almost funny, and so I laugh anyway and let the sound of my voice echo through the seemingly empty corners of my room. It's been a long night, but it's not over yet.
My eyes and my heart are as heavy as the open textbook before me, and so for a moment I raise my head to look around the room and see with my soul what my eyes cannot-- because I know that I'm never alone. At night fallen angels and devil's eyes patiently watch me in wait for the attack; the attack to pry at my mind and drain my soul of joy and peace and hope. The hope that is my last line of defense.
Now I should be afraid of their invisible touch, but I know they're there and I do not fear; for as the moon reflects the sun I know that I reflect the very light they wish to take.
So though I am surrounded, they do not dare touch me so long as hold onto that glimmer of hope. But if there's one thing I know, it's that the night is long and will not give up without a fight. And so the dark angels pace my room as I try to concentrate over the hum of my laptop.
The clock ticks on and on and it's 5:15 and I've just shut my laptop-- finished and exhausted. As my body sags and my eyes glaze over, the dark assailants signal the attack and descend upon me; falling on my ears with wholesome lies and sweet whispers of bruising thoughts. Without a touch they attack, eager to open the way to my soul, but a flicker of hope still surrounds my heart and so they still cannot have it.
As I lie awake too exhausted to sleep, and while my will-power ebbs away, I turn away from the attack and cling harder to the strand of hope that leads my eyes to the eastern horizon; Soon, I think. Soon.
The assailants slow, step away, and disappear altogether. Their time is up.
I look out the window relieved, watching quietly as the dimmest stars fade away, leaving only a dark smudgy sky behind. As light creeps slowly over the horizon foretelling the coming sunrise, I sink into bed and slowly descend to sleep. When I awaken I know I will be surrounded by guardian angels, and I will be guided by the hand of God. But when night falls and devil's eyes watch me once again, I will cling to that hope that ties my eyes to the eastern skies, where no-doubtedly a Dawn will live once again.
Dawn
My house is silent as the clock strikes 3:00, and I cannot help but sigh as I sing a familiar refrain that goes like... ♫ Three A.M., a boy sits outside his house lonely with his guitar ♫ The situation is almost funny, and so I laugh anyway and let the sound of my voice echo through the seemingly empty corners of my room. It's been a long night, but it's not over yet.
My eyes and my heart are as heavy as the open textbook before me, and so for a moment I raise my head to look around the room and see with my soul what my eyes cannot-- because I know that I'm never alone. At night fallen angels and devil's eyes patiently watch me in wait for the attack; the attack to pry at my mind and drain my soul of joy and peace and hope. The hope that is my last line of defense.
Now I should be afraid of their invisible touch, but I know they're there and I do not fear; for as the moon reflects the sun I know that I reflect the very light they wish to take.
So though I am surrounded, they do not dare touch me so long as hold onto that glimmer of hope. But if there's one thing I know, it's that the night is long and will not give up without a fight. And so the dark angels pace my room as I try to concentrate over the hum of my laptop.
The clock ticks on and on and it's 5:15 and I've just shut my laptop-- finished and exhausted. As my body sags and my eyes glaze over, the dark assailants signal the attack and descend upon me; falling on my ears with wholesome lies and sweet whispers of bruising thoughts. Without a touch they attack, eager to open the way to my soul, but a flicker of hope still surrounds my heart and so they still cannot have it.
As I lie awake too exhausted to sleep, and while my will-power ebbs away, I turn away from the attack and cling harder to the strand of hope that leads my eyes to the eastern horizon; Soon, I think. Soon.
The assailants slow, step away, and disappear altogether. Their time is up.
I look out the window relieved, watching quietly as the dimmest stars fade away, leaving only a dark smudgy sky behind. As light creeps slowly over the horizon foretelling the coming sunrise, I sink into bed and slowly descend to sleep. When I awaken I know I will be surrounded by guardian angels, and I will be guided by the hand of God. But when night falls and devil's eyes watch me once again, I will cling to that hope that ties my eyes to the eastern skies, where no-doubtedly a Dawn will live once again.
Tuesday, May 24, 2011
Monday, May 16, 2011
Songs with Stories
Song: Sk8terboy by Avril Lavigne
Plot: Once upon a time there was a punk, he was a skater and he was in love with "girl". Girl was secretly in love with Skaterboy too, but would never admit it because her friends thought he was yucky. Time goes on and Skaterboy becomes a big rock star and girl is a sad sad stay at home mom.
Characters:
Skaterboy
Girl
Girl's Friends
Narrator, Avril Lavigne, a.k.a. the girl who ends up getting the boy
Conflict: Girl and Skaterboy are in love, but girl is so overcome with her snobbishness and cares too much what her friends think so she stays away from skaterboy. Girl gets preggers, has children, and wishes she had gotten together with skaterboy but it's too late. He's with someone else now.
Theme: You need to follow your heart instead of listening to everyone else, or else you'll miss your chance.
Setting: Presumably a high school in the beginning, then girl's future house, and the rocking concert where skaterboy performs (and then the studio where Narrator and Skaterboy record the song).
Song: Farmer's Daughter by Crystal Bowersox
Plot: Narrator is a simple girl wracked with the grief caused by her father all throughout her life. All her life her and her brother have been neglected, ignored, and abused by their father. The girl is making her stand and finally telling her mother that she is disowning her father.
Characters:
Narrator, Crystal Bowersox, the daughter
Father
Mother
Brothers
Daughter's son
Conflict: All her life she's been abused by her father, and so finally she's making her stand and disowning him. She recounts how in the past he would come home drunk and beat her and her brothers, and so now all after this time she won't take it anymore. From now on he'll spend the rest of his life alone.
Theme: Breaking free, independence, overcoming traumatic things.
Setting: Assumed rural community, old run down house and simple looking school. A hotel room where the narrator stays with her young son.
Plot: Once upon a time there was a punk, he was a skater and he was in love with "girl". Girl was secretly in love with Skaterboy too, but would never admit it because her friends thought he was yucky. Time goes on and Skaterboy becomes a big rock star and girl is a sad sad stay at home mom.
Characters:
Skaterboy
Girl
Girl's Friends
Narrator, Avril Lavigne, a.k.a. the girl who ends up getting the boy
Conflict: Girl and Skaterboy are in love, but girl is so overcome with her snobbishness and cares too much what her friends think so she stays away from skaterboy. Girl gets preggers, has children, and wishes she had gotten together with skaterboy but it's too late. He's with someone else now.
Theme: You need to follow your heart instead of listening to everyone else, or else you'll miss your chance.
Setting: Presumably a high school in the beginning, then girl's future house, and the rocking concert where skaterboy performs (and then the studio where Narrator and Skaterboy record the song).
Song: Farmer's Daughter by Crystal Bowersox
Plot: Narrator is a simple girl wracked with the grief caused by her father all throughout her life. All her life her and her brother have been neglected, ignored, and abused by their father. The girl is making her stand and finally telling her mother that she is disowning her father.
Characters:
Narrator, Crystal Bowersox, the daughter
Father
Mother
Brothers
Daughter's son
Conflict: All her life she's been abused by her father, and so finally she's making her stand and disowning him. She recounts how in the past he would come home drunk and beat her and her brothers, and so now all after this time she won't take it anymore. From now on he'll spend the rest of his life alone.
Theme: Breaking free, independence, overcoming traumatic things.
Setting: Assumed rural community, old run down house and simple looking school. A hotel room where the narrator stays with her young son.
Film Analysis
Film: Hairspray
Ordinary World: Tracy Turnblad wakes up in her favorite city Baltimore and heads to school. After school she runs home with her best friend Penny Pingleton and watches the Corny Collins show.
The Call: Brenda, a member of the cast of the Corny Collins show, is taking a leave of absence ("Only nine months") and the show needs a new cast member.
Refusal: Tracy is excited to go try out, but when she runs the idea past her mother she immediately tells Tracy no. Tracy argues her best but her mother wants her to become a laundress.
Mentor: Tracy runs to her room, defeated and angry with her mother, when her dad comes in to talk to her. It looks like he's only going to comfort her, but instead tells her to buck-up and go for her dream, "you gotta be big to be big".
Threshold: Tracy goes to the audition, where the station's manager, Vhelma Vontussil, tells her she will never dance on television due to her size. Tracy returns to school late and is in turn sent to detention. In detention she catches the eye of the Corny Collin's Show's star Link Larkin and he tells her she should go to the dance and show off for none other than Corny Collins himself. Tracy goes to the dance, shows her stuff, and makes it on the show.
Tests, Allies, and Enemies: Amber Vontussil becomes extremely jealous of Tracy as she now has all of the lime light, and sets out to get revenge. Tracy on the other hand is more popular than ever, everyone wants to be her newest friend. With the detention crowd, Tracy, Penny, and Link Larkin all meet Seaweed, Lil' Inez, and then their eccentric mother "Motermouth" Mabelle. While at a dance at Mabelle's record studio, Vhelma Vontussil attempts to seduce Tracy's father and break up the family, but the attempt falls flat when Tracy's parents make up and reaffirm their love for one another.
Approach: The group at Mabelle's party all receive terrible news that Negro Day on the Corny Collins Show has been canceled. The group plans to protest the TV station and show they won't take this outrage. Tracy must debate whether or not to go with them.
The Ordeal: Tracy attends the protest, ruining any chance of her ever dancing on TV again, and the group marches on the station. The crowd of peaceful protesters meets a police barricade upon arriving at the station, and are told they cannot peaceably pass. Tracy losses per patience with the officer and smacks him gently with the sign. The officer takes the action as an act of violence and commands his officers to take them all in.
Reward: After Tracy flees, she escapes the police and hides at Penny's house. Penny and Seaweed admit their love for each other, and over long distance Tracy and Lark do the same.
The Road Back: The reformed group decide to crash the Miss Hairspray Pageant and get Tracy onto the stage to perform, they stage an elaborate break-in and let Tracy get in position for her big performance.
Resurrection: Just as Corny Collins is about to announce that Amber has won the Miss Hairspray Pageant, Tracy comes onto the stage from above in a smoking rocket ship and announces Amber is about to get out danced. Tracy performs and the show turns into anarchy as Link dances with Lil' Inez, Lil' Inez ends up winning the Pageant, and the show is integrated on a moments notice. The entire Corny Collins Cast, black and white, break out into one final dance number.
Return with Elixir: Tracy and Link are reunited, and in one final moment are caught up in a kiss that seals their love.
Ordinary World: Tracy Turnblad wakes up in her favorite city Baltimore and heads to school. After school she runs home with her best friend Penny Pingleton and watches the Corny Collins show.
The Call: Brenda, a member of the cast of the Corny Collins show, is taking a leave of absence ("Only nine months") and the show needs a new cast member.
Refusal: Tracy is excited to go try out, but when she runs the idea past her mother she immediately tells Tracy no. Tracy argues her best but her mother wants her to become a laundress.
Mentor: Tracy runs to her room, defeated and angry with her mother, when her dad comes in to talk to her. It looks like he's only going to comfort her, but instead tells her to buck-up and go for her dream, "you gotta be big to be big".
Threshold: Tracy goes to the audition, where the station's manager, Vhelma Vontussil, tells her she will never dance on television due to her size. Tracy returns to school late and is in turn sent to detention. In detention she catches the eye of the Corny Collin's Show's star Link Larkin and he tells her she should go to the dance and show off for none other than Corny Collins himself. Tracy goes to the dance, shows her stuff, and makes it on the show.
Tests, Allies, and Enemies: Amber Vontussil becomes extremely jealous of Tracy as she now has all of the lime light, and sets out to get revenge. Tracy on the other hand is more popular than ever, everyone wants to be her newest friend. With the detention crowd, Tracy, Penny, and Link Larkin all meet Seaweed, Lil' Inez, and then their eccentric mother "Motermouth" Mabelle. While at a dance at Mabelle's record studio, Vhelma Vontussil attempts to seduce Tracy's father and break up the family, but the attempt falls flat when Tracy's parents make up and reaffirm their love for one another.
Approach: The group at Mabelle's party all receive terrible news that Negro Day on the Corny Collins Show has been canceled. The group plans to protest the TV station and show they won't take this outrage. Tracy must debate whether or not to go with them.
The Ordeal: Tracy attends the protest, ruining any chance of her ever dancing on TV again, and the group marches on the station. The crowd of peaceful protesters meets a police barricade upon arriving at the station, and are told they cannot peaceably pass. Tracy losses per patience with the officer and smacks him gently with the sign. The officer takes the action as an act of violence and commands his officers to take them all in.
Reward: After Tracy flees, she escapes the police and hides at Penny's house. Penny and Seaweed admit their love for each other, and over long distance Tracy and Lark do the same.
The Road Back: The reformed group decide to crash the Miss Hairspray Pageant and get Tracy onto the stage to perform, they stage an elaborate break-in and let Tracy get in position for her big performance.
Resurrection: Just as Corny Collins is about to announce that Amber has won the Miss Hairspray Pageant, Tracy comes onto the stage from above in a smoking rocket ship and announces Amber is about to get out danced. Tracy performs and the show turns into anarchy as Link dances with Lil' Inez, Lil' Inez ends up winning the Pageant, and the show is integrated on a moments notice. The entire Corny Collins Cast, black and white, break out into one final dance number.
Return with Elixir: Tracy and Link are reunited, and in one final moment are caught up in a kiss that seals their love.
Monday, April 18, 2011
Greetings From Slackerville
Hello and salutations,
Coming back from my figurative vacation to Slackerville, I came to a startling realization. I'm behind, like seriously. Thanks for being patient with me, not everyone deserves the opportunity to redeem themselves after slacking off and thankfully I do. Check in later for new and awesome stuff!
-Love, hugs, and kisses,
George
Coming back from my figurative vacation to Slackerville, I came to a startling realization. I'm behind, like seriously. Thanks for being patient with me, not everyone deserves the opportunity to redeem themselves after slacking off and thankfully I do. Check in later for new and awesome stuff!
-Love, hugs, and kisses,
George
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